Cut down of thoughts shot by shot
their will be four women characters and four babies. All will be from different race and religion. Maybe a muslim, Christian, black, asian. (The film is not intended to offend anyone).
The children are with their mothers and they bump into each other at a park for kids. The women noses in the air look at each other in a judge mental way and look the other way. The kids are playing on the side and after a few seconds the babies can not bee seen. The viewers can see what they are doing being all naughty in the kids area. The women are searching and going crazy and then they start blaming each other and yelling. When we see the scenes going back and forth from the kids to the mothers we don't know that the kids are together. The viewer sees each child on their own. The mothers get into a real fight, things flying and all. They are fighting and rolling onto the ground until they bump into the play area into their babies. The audience will not know yet that they bumped into the kids.They then stop and come out looking all messed up. We see them standing in a line then with a close up on their open mouths. The camera focusses on all the kids playing together.
their will be four women characters and four babies. All will be from different race and religion. Maybe a muslim, Christian, black, asian. (The film is not intended to offend anyone).
The children are with their mothers and they bump into each other at a park for kids. The women noses in the air look at each other in a judge mental way and look the other way. The kids are playing on the side and after a few seconds the babies can not bee seen. The viewers can see what they are doing being all naughty in the kids area. The women are searching and going crazy and then they start blaming each other and yelling. When we see the scenes going back and forth from the kids to the mothers we don't know that the kids are together. The viewer sees each child on their own. The mothers get into a real fight, things flying and all. They are fighting and rolling onto the ground until they bump into the play area into their babies. The audience will not know yet that they bumped into the kids.They then stop and come out looking all messed up. We see them standing in a line then with a close up on their open mouths. The camera focusses on all the kids playing together.
hahahaha, I am christian and offended!
ReplyDeleteI really like your characters, I like that mothers and children are dressed in the same way, it's smart ;)